Creating Song Elements

Prison March:

Logline: A bunch of prisoners are sent to a mine to serve their sentence and their only break is to sleep and to eat.

Questions:

Would a harmony on the bass or guitar or both sound cool with the song?

Is there anything you would improve on with the beginning of the song?

Is there too much distortion on the guitar or the bass?

P.S. I tried to add drums but Soundtrap was making the original track sound not right so I couldn’t record the drums properly 🙁

Feedback

Add harmony – Tristan

The distortion at the beginning was a bit too much but the ladder half was perfect. – Matthew

Maybe swap the beginning and the end – Rahi

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